by Roger White, copyright October 2018
Assignment 3 -- Upload your response to the feedback to the assignment portal in Canvas, which briefly demonstrates an understanding of TWO criticisms I made of your paper. This understanding may pertain to organizational, stylistic and/or grammatical critiques.
The critique:
-you did some very good research, described the background to the Afghan War nicely, and offered some potential solutions
-very well-written and organized
-overall, the essay was quite well done except for one important omission -- you did not connect why the US went in and stayed in Afghanistan to International Relations Theories/Paradigms such as Realism, Liberalism, Constructivism, etc. That was a key part of the assignment
-read my few comments
Thanks for your input, Prof. Moore.
I enjoy history so my answer is history-oriented. I'm just learning the jargon and concepts of IR, so it is harder to incorporate them quickly into my writings. But I'm working on it, and I'm adding these concepts to my thinking on these topics.
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